Dialouge Tree

Dialouge

Vortex: Fancy seeing you here metal face, just in time eh?

Metal face: I came as quick as i could, so wheres he at?

Vortex: over there... with his "friends" ahaha...

Matal face: Oh i see... shall we... kick some ass then?

Vortex: On the count of thee?

Metal face: 3, 2...

Vortex: 1...!

(after an epic battle you are victorious! but you are seriously wounded...)

Metal face: VORTEX!!! Ima comin' buddy!

Vortex: Hurry... i cant... breath...

Metal face: its okay mate im here for you! Now lets get outa this hell hole and get ya some help, i know a guy in rino... he'll know what to do!

Vortex: sounds like a... plan mate!

(you then flee to rino in search for metal face's mate before its to late!)

Story Thing

Story.

Vortex was born in 1980, at the age of two his parents died and he was left to fend for himself at a tough and horrible orphanage up until the age of 9 when two elderly adults adopted him. He was forced into an unloving and hostile environment when he was yet again forced to fend for himself whenever things got tough.

After many years of being bullied and tormented by both his foster parents and bullies he left the neighborhood and found his long lost uncle, a kind man. He then spent the rest of his teenage life with his uncle until he decided to move away and find a life of his own, so he moved and found a job and a flat ect… 

After many, many more years of tedious work in a dead end job he began to drink himself into depression and turned against himself in an act of resentment throughout his childhood. Depending on drink to get him through the week he spent most nights alone at a bar up until the early hours of the morning.

After many months of relentless drinking vortex stumbles home in the early hours of the morning you come across a strange looking man, he begins to start a fight with you, you quickly retaliate and defeat him. Suddenly a storm arises and you are hit with lightning! You then wake up with a headache, after a week or two you soon start to realize you are stronger… so one night you start a fight and at the edge of death with all your strength a huge gust of wind blows the attacker off of you and you then discover your power!

Adjective and adverb task

Adjectives:

• Hot
• Bright
• Dense 
• Crowded
• Dangerous
• Painful
• Faithful 
• Passionate
• Strong
• Tough 
• Willing 
• Obsessed
• Blazing
• Burning
• Scorching
• Blistering
• Fiery
• Boiling
• Roasting
• Blinding
• Radient
• Powerful
• Torrid 
• Metallic
• Fearless

This man fearlessly sat in the scorching heat among a strong blazing heap of fiery flames as he dangerously set himself alight in the blistering, burning, boiling fire.  

Dream:
Back in year five a long time ago me an my mates were happily playing football on the lovely fresh cut grass. Then at lunch time the year below loudly challanged us to a game of football. half way through the match i quickly began to get tired so in the last few minutes i pushed to get a header, then with a quick movemnt i horifically fell to the ground in pain from a roughly played tackle. after a few antaginizgly painful hours i found out my right leg was broken.. in two places!

After reading it thrpugh i can tell that it seems to have a lot more enthusiasm and ryhtm, it also sounds alot more detailed and specific.

Flow chart

Character Profile

Character Profile Sheet

Character Name

Full Name: Vortex

Nick Name(s): Vortex

Gender: Male

Age: 23

Birthday/year: 1980

Marital Status: signal
Spouse:

Hair: Brown

Eyes: Blue

Origin:

Language(s): Everyone

Height: 6ft

Weight/Body Structure/Distinguishing Marks/Traits: Hench

Ethnicity White british

Parents /Guardians: none

Siblings: none

Friends/Allies: Metal Face

Enemies: The devil himself

Beliefs/Religion: Pastafarian

Career/Past Careers: being awesome

Dreams/Life Goals: to declare world peace

Hobbies: kicking ass

Likes: Women

Loves: Women

Dislikes: Anything and everything that is evil

Loathes: Evil

Fears: Dying alone

Strengths: Strength, lovable nature, caring, understanding… ect.

Weaknesses: Too caring, can easily get angry and over react… ect.

Good Qualities: handsomeness, kind, loving… ect.

Bad Habits: Smoking, drinking... ect.

Turn Ons: Attractive women

Turn Offs: Ugly Women

Talents: Fighting crime and evil.

Special Skills: the power of wind, hurricanes tornados… ect.

Background:

Soon after vortex was born his parents died in a tragic car crash, he was forced to grow up with foster parents that resented him. He grew up in a rough neighbourhood and got into a lot of fights. As a young adult he soon got out of the environment he was forced upon. After many years of education and hard work he got himself a good job but after a few more years he soon began to get depressed. One day he was out for a walk and was approached by a man in distress yelling “take it god damn it, take it”. Vortex had no idea what was going on at this point as a storm arose and a huge lightning bolt stuck him on the head, and then it went dark. 

Game Basics

Scratch basics.

(The first scene) A long time ago, when you were very little you acquired a very special talent, a super power if you will? The power of wind! When you managed to control this power you began to fight crime alongside the police, through these actions you make some very strong enemies in very high places. One day they tried to make a deal with you, if you join them they wont hurt you, protect you in fact. But as a fighting crime hero you declined this offer making your enemies even angrier. They then set out to hunt you down and kill you. But after many years of evading them they have finally caught up to you!

Dialogue.

Nemesis: Vortex, today is your last! Come heather and face your eternal DOOM!

Vortex: I shall never surrender into the hands of you

Nemesis: Hahahahaha! You have no choice Vortex. So now you must DIE!! Muahahahahahahahaha…

Whilst you nemesis is in the middle of his speech of how you will die, not paying attention you manage to get the time to slip away but you only have a lead of barley minutes! As you run you figure you can take them on, after all you have the power if wind!

(You now must make you choices)

Vortex my character.

Today we were asked to carry on with our story development and to produce a character profile, but in my spare time I went ahead and decided to do a basic stance as my character uses his power of wind!
Here is a first rough copy I did in an hour or two.

Then after I had saved this I decided to go over it with a lot better detail and precision and this was what I got after another hour and a half.