Adjectives:
- Hot
- Bright
- Dense
- Crowded
- Dangerous
- Painful
- Faithful
- Passionate
- Strong
- Tough
- Willing
- Obsessed
- Blazing
- Burning
- Scorching
- Blistering
- Fiery
- Boiling
- Roasting
- Blinding
- Radient
- Powerful
- Torrid
- Metallic
- Fearless
This man fearlessly sat in the scorching heat among a strong blazing heap of fiery flames as he dangerously set himself alight in the blistering, burning, boiling fire.
Dream:
Back in year five a long time ago me an my mates were happily playing football on the lovely fresh cut grass. Then at lunch time the year below loudly challanged us to a game of football. half way through the match i quickly began to get tired so in the last few minutes i pushed to get a header, then with a quick movemnt i horifically fell to the ground in pain from a roughly played tackle. after a few antaginizgly painful hours i found out my right leg was broken.. in two places!
After reading it thrpugh i can tell that it seems to have a lot more enthusiasm and ryhtm, it also sounds alot more detailed and specific.
Dream:
Back in year five a long time ago me an my mates were happily playing football on the lovely fresh cut grass. Then at lunch time the year below loudly challanged us to a game of football. half way through the match i quickly began to get tired so in the last few minutes i pushed to get a header, then with a quick movemnt i horifically fell to the ground in pain from a roughly played tackle. after a few antaginizgly painful hours i found out my right leg was broken.. in two places!
After reading it thrpugh i can tell that it seems to have a lot more enthusiasm and ryhtm, it also sounds alot more detailed and specific.
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